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Welcome to my blog for the exciting novel Nephi’s Way Back!!

"There's something about the story of getting back home which is one of the seven great stories of literature. How to get back home? And that's what this is." (Tom Hanks in bonus materials of the DVD for the movie Apollo 13.) This novel takes stories from the scriptures and is about getting back home. May you like the scriptures as you liken them to a mission of returning home.

Begin reading with chapter 1. You will find the earlier chapters in the archive and the final chapters on this main page.

Why did I write Nephi’s Way Back?

This is a fictional story based on several scriptures from the Book of Mormon and the Bible and also alludes to events in LDS church history. This linking of stories and events from different times and places shows how the scriptures testify of Jesus Christ and His atonement. In the end, He is the only way back.

Why did I write this blog?

My goal is to share this novel with as many people as possible. If you enjoy this book, your friends will too. Please tell others about this book by inviting them to this site: www.writethewayback.blogspot.com.

Success for me will be when somebody I don’t know comments that they’ve begun to find new insights from the scriptures after reading this book. I truly hope that will be you!

Saturday, March 30, 2013

3. Temptation


CHAPTER 3

TEMPTATION



Arumor had suspected for some time that Nephi and his father somehow knew about his dirty little secret.  His fear had been confirmed.  Nephi did know!  He’d said it with his own mouth.

As a member of the elite guard, Arumor had indeed secretly agreed to conduct Seantum to the judgment-seat.  That had allowed Seantum to murder the chief judge.



Nephi must have instinctively blinked.  For, in no more time than the blink of an eye, he saw that Arumor had fallen to the ground at his feet.  He lay coiled over on his back and side.  The right arm remained frozen high over his head, the sword clutched in his fist.  The serpentine helmet was knocked askew across one ear.  Arumor’s face was contorted as if in severe pain.  His eyes were wide open in fright -- but stared blankly without movement.  The jaw gaped open.  His head was tilted backwards by his long neck, his Adam’s apple in clear view. 

Two men stood by the side of the fallen Arumor.  Maybe they were in fact standing; their unshod feet did not quite reach the ground.  The surrounding air looked as if it was a cloud, so it was hard to tell.  They wore loosely fitting robes that were white and girdled around the waist with a sash.  Their faces shone.

One of the men spoke to Nephi with a voice that was still and gentle, and at the same time, the voice seemed to penetrate through his entire body as well as his ears, saying;

“Nephi, be not afraid.  We have come to deliver thee.”

“You know me?” asked Nephi.

“Behold, the Lord hath heard the prayers of his servant, Nephi, thy father.  For he has prayed with much faith concerning thee that thou mightest be able to take his place in leading thy people in truth and righteousness.”

“What do you want me to do?” inquired Nephi in amazement.

“Go now.  Avoid all temptations.  Thy father will meet thee here in the temple-palace.  Then, in the future when thou art prepared, thou shalt know what to do.”

The cloud departed and the two men disappeared.

Nephi was stunned.  He kneeled down next to Arumor and placed his fingers on the exposed neck to check for a pulse.  He put his ear close to the gaping mouth and listened carefully.  A tiny pulse was felt and irregular faint and shallow breaths could be heard.  He was not dead.

Shouldn’t this evil man who no longer possesses the light of Christ deserve to die?

Nephi shuddered at the vividness and the intensity of this unexpected thought.  He wondered.  Where does this idea come from?  Why am I so tempted!?  His body shook uncontrollably and violently all over.

The account from the sacred records about first Father Nephi came visibly into Nephi’s consciousness.  He cut off the head of Laban using Laban’s own sword!  Why does my ancestry come to remembrance so distinctly at this time?  Here is Arumor’s sword, still in his hand.  And here is Arumor, as if he were Laban, unconscious on the ground before me.  Oh, why do I feel so tried?

Nephi wrestled mightily in spirit.  In his heart, he would never at any time shed the blood of another man, even an enemy.  He shrank at the prospect that he might slay Arumor.

Nephi pried the sword out of Arumor’s hand and examined it.  He lifted it to feel its weight.  He had never seen a sword so exquisite.  The workmanship was impressive.  The hilt appeared to be laced with gold.  The blade was of the most precious steel, the edges extremely sharp.

Am I to repeat history?  Arumor has been my enemy for as long as I can remember.  I remember he was here when I came to visit father when he was chief judge.  He was here with his snide remarks to me, his insults, and his threatening looks at me.  He has to be a member of the band of Gadianton, even though membership in the band is kept secret.  He must know their secret signs, their secret plans, their secret murders.  He is a liar.  He tried to kill me!

And not only me, he severely abused Timothy at Tyreantum’s trial for mother’s murder.  That is unforgiveable.  Timothy was only six years old at the time!  Even an adult would have crumpled with such abuse.  Timothy will be emotionally scarred for life.

Why didn’t the angels kill him?  He deserves to die!  Tell me, dear Lord, is it up to me?

Nephi was upon his knees beside the body of Arumor.  He prayed fervently that this temptation would leave him.  He remained on his knees for quite some time.  His body shook; his head bowed.  He listened.

After a long time, his body ceased to tremble.  The sword of Arumor fell from his hands.

Nephi rose to his feet.  The tracks of his tears trailed from the corners of his eyes and covered his entire face.

The temptation was over.  Silently and quickly, Nephi stepped over Arumor’s unresponsive body without touching it.  He walked reverently forward and entered the temple-palace.  He didn’t glance to the left or to the right.  He didn’t look back.  He didn’t care anymore if other people were around or not.

The voice of the Lord had spoken.

Tuesday, March 26, 2013

2. Good and Evil


CHAPTER 2

GOOD AND EVIL



Thrust into a new environment, Nephi’s eyes needed time to adjust.  He stood frozen in place.  His senses told him to be wary of this person he could not yet discern.

“Well, Nephi.”  The man approached with long, gliding strides.  “You have not been up here in our world for some time.  What are you doing here?”

“You know me?” asked Nephi when he finally was able to find his voice.

“Of course I know you,” said the stranger.

As his eyes slowly adjusted, Nephi began to perceive that the man in front of him was unusually tall and slender with a long trunk, narrow in the shoulders, and flexible.  He was noticeably strong as well.  The long muscles and protruding tendons in his bare arms and neck coiled and twisted underneath skin that was taut and shiny.  He wore the clothing and breast plate that distinguished him as a member of the elite guard.  The helmet on the man’s head was decorated with a snake, fangs prominently displayed, ready to strike. 

“I know you, because --- I am your brother,” continued the man.

“You?  My brother!?”  Nephi could clearly see that this guard was not his brother.

“Yes, or I could be your brother.  We are all brothers who come up here to worship the stars, the moon, the sun; the gods of this world.  You must join us, Nephi.  You must become a brother with us to know the pleasures that living in this world can bring.”

“I will not be your brother,” replied Nephi without hesitation.  “I intend to worship the one and only true God.”

“Oh, I s-s-s-see. You are still fooled by the teachings of your father, aren’t you?”

“My father’s teachings are the truth.  I remember you now.  You’re Arumor.  You defended Tyreantum for Alumon.  You’re all hypocrites.  Because of you and your ‘brothers’, father delivered up the judgment-seat.  Things are even worse now than they were then with your kind of poison destroying people.”

“Yes-s-s-s.  I’m surprised it took you this long to remember me.  And what are you going to do about it now?”  Arumor withdrew the sword tied to his waist.  His arm muscles bulged at the biceps while he waved his sword menacingly back and forth at Nephi.  Arumor licked his lips with his tongue and curled down to put his face inches away.  He glared at Nephi, nose to nose.

Nephi stood his ground and did not back away.  “I’m going to go about my own personal business and leave you alone,” answered Nephi as calmly as he could.  His own blood was on the rise.  “And you are going to let me enter this temple-palace to do it.”

“Not a chance!” screeched Arumor.  Sneering, he quickly snapped his head back and spat directly into Nephi’s face.  “You’ve made plans with your father again, haven’t you?  He’s a liar!  And you’re the son of a liar!  You both deserve to be punished!”

Trying hard to control himself, Nephi coolly brushed away the spittle with the back of his hand and flung it to the ground.  “I’ll hear none of your threats or your accusations today.  Step aside while I go about my business, and you go about yours.”  Nephi’s heretofore untested bravery came from a confidence somewhere deep inside, and even surprised him somewhat.

“No way!” snarled Arumor.  “What do you take me for?  A fool?  I’m throwing you in prison!  And we’ll keep you in prison, chained up tightly, until you finally confess about the agreement made for the murder.”

“What agreement would I have arranged in the murder of my own mother?”

 “Not that murder!! …  I mean---accident.”  Arumor’s slip of tongue trapped him.  This angered him all the more.  He lied to cover up his mistake.  “You never learn, do you?  When will you grow up, young Nephi?  An accident is merely an accident.  It’s a shame your mother had one.  But you, your father and family, called it murder and claimed Tyreantum had done it.  But it didn’t work, did it!?  Alumon ruled that he was innocent.  Innocent!  Is there something about innocent that you don’t understand?”

“Well then, for which murder do you think an agreement was made?”  Nephi already knew the answer to this question.

 “Why, the murder of Seezoram, my kinsman, of course!  That’s the only real murder that’s occurred here!”

“Then you really are a fool, Arumor.  You already know that Seantum’s confession specifically said that my father had nothing to do with it.  There was no agreement except between yourselves.” 

“Lies!  And more lies!  Here we go again with your faulty so-called wisdom.  I happen to know that Seantum was forced to confess.  That confession meant nothing!  Nothing!  It’s all part of the big secret to conceal your role in it!  You’re the guilty one, not us!”

Arumor pressed the tip of his sword against Nephi’s neck.  Unarmed, Nephi faced his accuser and didn’t flinch.  The recurring accusations which implied that his father, or members of his father’s family, had something to do with the murder of Seezoram, the chief judge, infuriated him.  Would such evil rumors never stop spreading?  Seezoram’s own brother had freely confessed that he acted alone in committing the murder.

“And you’re not listening to me again, Nephi,” Arumor continued his ranting.  “I didn’t saying anything about an agreement your father made.  You would do anything for your father, wouldn’t you?  Especially make an agreement that would protect him.  It was you who made the arrangements!  It was you who was the accomplice!   It was you with the motive to help your father look good since his prophecies are nothing but lies!”

“Listen very carefully to me, Arumor,” Nephi spoke clearly and boldly even though Arumor’s sword was pressed to his throat.  “Your insults and your vain imaginings show cowardice.  Your eyes are blind to the truth; your mind is ignorant with evil intentions.”

“My!  That’s brave and clever talk from someone as stupid as you.  My sword can make a rather powerful speech as well!”

The giant guard pressed the tip of his sword harder into Nephi’s throat.  The veins in Arumor’s neck and face popped out from under his sweaty skin.  He bared his fangs and hissed a final threat between tightly clenched teeth.  “For justice in the name of Seezoram’s blood, your blood will flow upon this ground!!”

Nephi actually stood a little straighter, a little stronger.  The odor of strong wine dominated Arumor’s foul-smelling breath.

 “You hypocrite!”  Nephi answered back.  “If you yourself hadn’t secretly agreed to escort Seantum to the judgment-seat, Seezoram’s blood would not have been spilt!”

“Why you lying, filthy pig!!”  Arumor screamed.  He could not let anyone outside of the sworn brotherhood know their evil secrets.  He had to retaliate in the only possible way.

Gripping the sword tightly in his right hand, and raising it high over his head, Arumor prepared to land a powerful blow that would separate head from body.

Saturday, March 23, 2013

1. Out of the Garden


CHAPTER 1

OUT OF THE GARDEN



         
          Nephi turned east.   The rising sun would not be hidden by the tree tops much longer.  Looming in the distance were the dark silhouettes of the temple pyramids climbing high into the sky with their steep sides and sharply angled corners.  At the top of the tallest pyramid was a flat ceremonial platform.  The first beam of sunlight through the windows of the temple-palaces would be carefully marked by the Elders of Zarahemla.

          Until now, Nephi had walked through the forest on the soft, narrow dirt paths he easily followed.  When he reached the first stone-paved street of the city, he stopped momentarily in the shadow of the central pyramid.

In comparison to his own garden home, the city streets of Zarahemla were brown and treeless.  The most heavily traveled streets had been paved with stone so that mud during the rainy season would not hinder the wagons loaded with goods for the market place.

Nephi had purposefully selected a secluded space away from the city for his own home.  He built his hut in six days.  At the end of each day, he saw that his work was good and he was pleased with his creation.

First, he cleared and leveled enough ground for a simple, one room structure.  Then, he made a typical rectangular hut with walls made from wood covered with adobe and whitened with lime.  The roof was constructed next from shorn wood lashed together to form the beams which were then expertly thatched together with native palm fronds to be water tight, even in the heaviest rains.   One central opening facing east served as a doorway. 

Surrounding the hut was a garden with orchids and other beautiful flowers.  Nephi lovingly tended his garden every day and had names for all the many animals he frequently found there.  Chickens always scratched through the yard to peck at scattered seeds.  Included in the garden were trees of every kind; palms, dates, bananas, bamboo, ferns and other tropical shrubs.

Nephi spent most of his time alone in the garden.  After completing his own new hut, he anxiously anticipated the day he would find the right girl, get married, and share this hut with his wife.

Upon entering the streets of Zarahemla, Nephi paused and took a deep breath.  He filled his lungs with the air and then let it out slowly.  He closed his eyes and tried to clear his mind to help him relax.  It didn’t work.  His heart beat rapidly and beads of sweat appeared on his forehead, even though the early morning air was cool and calm.

At this early hour, few people had risen from hammocks in their own village huts on the outskirts of the city.  First, fires for cooking would be prepared, and water brought from the river.  Afterward, attention would be given to the smaller children, the chickens, the pigs, and the usual morning chores.

Later in the day, the streets of Zarahemla would become crowded with merchants who would set up their tables with all sorts of merchandise to sell.  There would be haggling over the cost of apparel, jewelry, necklaces, beads, bread, fruit, knives, and just about anything else for which they sought gain by the exchange of money.  At the end of the day, those who already had the most money expected to have even more.

Since the streets were nearly empty, nobody was likely to notice Nephi, recognize him, and ask what he was doing, or question him about why he was headed towards the judgment-seat.  Nevertheless, Nephi felt the tension grow in his nerves.  He was closer to returning to a dreadful destination of unpleasant memories than he had been in a very long time.

Because of the tragic events he had witnessed there in the past, Nephi would forever associate suffering and pain with going to the judgment-seat.  Nevertheless, he had promised his father that he would do it, saying, “I will go.  May your will be done.”  He was determined to fulfill the mysterious mission his father desired no matter what trials and afflictions or consequences it meant for him personally.

Nephi had agreed to meet with his father without a full knowledge of his father’s plan.  His father wasn’t forcing him to come.  But he also hadn’t satisfactorily explained why the judgment-seat had to be the only place they could go.

“I’ll be waiting for you there,” his father said reassuringly.  “You’ll learn how important this is to me.  Be sure to bring your personal seal.  We won’t need to stay very long.”  He had never insisted quite like this before.

Nephi started to walk again towards the pyramids.  His thinly sandaled feet left no tracks on the hard, stoned streets.  He even quickened his pace to get there faster.  He knew the best way to go.  The route was still familiar.  He had passed through these same streets leading to the judgment-seat many times when he was a boy, at least ten years ago.

Although the streets were still mostly the same, so many other things had changed in the intervening years.  The familiar route had a totally different feel to it than before.  The judgment-seat itself, more than anything else, symbolized how much things could change in not many years’ time.  The closer Nephi got to the judgment-seat, the larger and the more ominous the new pyramids with their towering temple structures appeared.  Judgment-seat was the common term used to refer to the entire combination of pyramid-like structures erected at this site. 

The murders committed at the judgment-seat still divided the people into contentious factions.  A few people still believed that Nephi’s father was a great prophet and leader, but most of the people had apostatized and were fooled by the Nehors and the band of Gadianton into believing that his father was a liar.  Those in power now were wicked men who had seized control of the government to advance their evil ways.

The previous night had been a long one for Nephi.  He had tossed and turned in his hammock with many unanswered questions.  Sleep had come fleetingly at best.  His father’s few words echoed over and over again in Nephi’s mind.  Things like, why would I need to be sure to bring my personal seal?   Why does father seem so reluctant to answer my questions?  If “I’ll be waiting for you there” meant father feels the way I do about the judgment-seat, then why can’t we meet somewhere else?  Who else might I be seeing besides father?  Will Timothy be there too?  Will he be required to testify again?  Will the entrance be guarded by our enemies?  What commotion will result if father, my brother, and I all show up at the same time!?

“It’s all set then.  We’ll meet just after sunrise.  Don’t worry, son.  I know that going to the judgment-seat will be different for you than before.  This has nothing to do with your mother’s death, however.  Everything will be fine.  You’ll understand later why I am asking you to do this.”

Nephi’s father acted like the meeting planned for the next day was urgent, but had stopped speaking about it and departed rather abruptly, leaving him with so many unanswered questions.   That was so typical of his father, to say only your mother’s death instead of your mother’s murder.

His father seemed very confident that everything would be all right.  Trust in his father allowed Nephi to act in faith.  Despite the counsel to not worry, a constant stream of questions ran through Nephi’s mind all night.  What unknown dangers would confront them?  What about their enemies who were in control there now?  How difficult would it be to receive permission from the guards to enter the temple palace?

The history of the judgment-seat murders made it more difficult for everyone to enter the temple-palace.  Previously, people came and went as they pleased.  Now, guards constantly watching the pyramids would stop and question anyone they didn’t like.  For Nephi, his immediate family members, and their few loyal friends, entering the temple-palace these days was potentially dangerous!

This early in the day, at least fewer guards would be present.

Nephi quickened his pace through the central streets of Zarahemla so much that he practically ran into the massive courtyard which encircled the many elaborate structures of the judgment-seat.  The individual pyramids were called either temples, or palaces, or oftentimes temple-palaces.  The tall pyramids with flat tops were the ceremonial platforms.

The exact position and construction of each pyramid was carefully planned to assist in the study of the movements of the sun, the moon, and the stars.  Since the sun had just risen to the height of the tall temple-palace on the east side of the courtyard, somewhere inside the twin temple-palace on the west side, the Elders of Zarahemla were discussing the significance of this morning’s observations.

Rushing into the courtyard from the west, eyes nearly closed against the morning sun, Nephi stumbled.  Forced to slow down, and to look down, he pressed onward more cautiously.  He wanted to avoid looking up to where his mother last stood anyway.

He crept towards the largest of the pyramid structures.  This was the impressively high ceremonial platform palace at the center of the surrounding pyramids.  The shadow cast by the steeply-sided structure was divided from the light in the open courtyard.

Most people would climb the steep steps on the outside of the pyramid to view the sunrise on the platform from the very top.  Nephi, instead, moved stealthily along the base of the pyramid to reach a ground-level entrance on the east side.

Small beads of perspiration again appeared on Nephi’s forehead.  His heart beat rapidly in his chest.  The closer he came to the entrance, the more alert to danger he became.  Nephi took a deep breath through his nose and blew it out his mouth.  He smelled the dust of the ground and became acutely aware of the uneasiness of his soul.  A silent prayer for courage was offered when he reached the corner of the palace where he had to leave the shadow and step out into the glaring sunlight.

Nephi took the next step and turned the corner.  Suddenly exposed to the light, he instinctively felt naked.  His natural tendency would have been to turn back and hide in the shadow once again.  He no longer had the choice to remain concealed.

He heard the voice of a man from somewhere who hissed, “S-S-S-Stop!!”