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"There's something about the story of getting back home which is one of the seven great stories of literature. How to get back home? And that's what this is." (Tom Hanks in bonus materials of the DVD for the movie Apollo 13.) This novel takes stories from the scriptures and is about getting back home. May you like the scriptures as you liken them to a mission of returning home.

Begin reading with chapter 1. You will find the earlier chapters in the archive and the final chapters on this main page.

Why did I write Nephi’s Way Back?

This is a fictional story based on several scriptures from the Book of Mormon and the Bible and also alludes to events in LDS church history. This linking of stories and events from different times and places shows how the scriptures testify of Jesus Christ and His atonement. In the end, He is the only way back.

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My goal is to share this novel with as many people as possible. If you enjoy this book, your friends will too. Please tell others about this book by inviting them to this site: www.writethewayback.blogspot.com.

Success for me will be when somebody I don’t know comments that they’ve begun to find new insights from the scriptures after reading this book. I truly hope that will be you!

Saturday, August 24, 2013

20. Bound and Delivered

CHAPTER 20

BOUND AND DELIVERED



          Moriancom pointed forward and a little to the right as he shouted down to everyone below.  More than a week had passed with nothing to see but sea in every direction.  So sighting land was a moment of great excitement and rejoicing among the passengers.  Everyone rushed onto the deck and ran forward to try and see the land for themselves.  Everybody shouted with joy as soon as they could view the land for themselves.

          Everyone, that is, except Nephi and Hantuman.  While the others were pointing and otherwise distracted, Hantuman went over to Nephi and consulted with him.  He wanted to tell Nephi what he thought would happen next and to see if Nephi would agree with his plan of action.

Hantuman reasoned, “Maneuvering the ship through the reefs to a safe harbor will be the most difficult navigational challenge of the entire voyage.  Tyreantum is smart enough to know that.   I don’t expect him to attempt anything until we actually approach the shore.  It is then that I expect him to try something.  I suggest we wait until we’ve passed the reef and are near to the shore before we do something.”

“I agree with you.”  Nephi’s respect for Hantuman had grown immensely during the voyage.  Not only was there no equal for his skills for navigating on the sea, but his talent for knowing how to act in times of danger was a blessing.

“We just don’t know when Tyreantum and his pals are going to cause trouble.”  Hantuman continued to explore the possibilities ahead of them.  “We could try to get away before they capture us.  Once the ship clears the reef, we could jump for the water and swim for the shore.  We might be able to get away – if the waves don’t first smash us against the rocks, or if they don’t shoot us with their arrows, and if there’s someplace we can hide, and if …”

“Well, we could.  But…” Nephi didn’t like those prospects.

But Hantuman reasoned further, “But I think we should let ourselves be captured so it looks like they’ve surprised us.  Just like they’ve already planned it.  That way, they’ll be less likely to think that something is amiss.  If we abandon ship on our own, that might potentially provoke them to harm Lehi perhaps more than they have already.  What do you think, Nephi?  I don’t want to go against your inspired judgment in this situation.”

 Nephi knew he could place his trust in the hand of the Lord.  He said, “I agree with you completely.  As I have prayed about what we should do, I felt the Spirit witness to me that the Lord will open the way.  Whatever happens will be according to the will of the Lord.  I am not afraid to be a prisoner again, should it come to that.  The Spirit tells me that our work is not finished; therefore they can’t harm us until our mission is completed.”

 “Good.  So be it then.”  Hantuman was of the same mind as Nephi.  “Tomorrow, I will know exactly where we are and which land this is that Moriancom has spotted.  If it is the land that I think it is, I know a good harbor where we will land the ship.  Welcome back to the land northward, Nephi.  …Well, … maybe not so welcome this time, is it?”



          Hantuman skillfully maneuvered the ship toward a beautiful bay surrounded by palm trees growing on a wide beach of clustered sand dunes.  The day had been uneventful so far.  Nephi and the other passengers stood on the deck and watched as the ship made its way through a channel in the dangerous reef.  Moriancom, high up on the mast, occasionally yelled down observations from his point of view that were most helpful to Hantuman.

          The calmer waters of the bay were now all that remained between the ship and the shore.

          This was a time of excitement.  The arrival of a large ship always attracted a lot of attention, and a crowd of people gathered on the shore.  The crowd waved their arms and shouted.  The passengers on the ship waved back and pointed to people that they thought they recognized.  Someone ran along the beach waving a large red flag.

          Nephi was at the front of the ship carefully watching for shallow water and any large, submerged rocks.  Hantuman was at the rudder.  So they did not notice Tyreantum, who was positioned at the rear of the ship, smile in satisfaction.  He had seen the signal.

          Tyreantum unraveled a red flag of his own and circled it over his head.  He lowered the flag and repeated the same circling motion once again.  The person on the shore also circled his flag over his head before disappearing from sight.   Tyreantum rolled up his flag and motioned to another passenger with a wave of his hand.  The plan was in place.

          Six canoes rapidly approached the ship.  Each canoe was paddled by six strong men who all wore an arm band of red cloth.  The canoes came up alongside the ship and the passengers lowered ropes for the men to climb aboard.  Passengers and men from the canoes greeted each other with cheers and hand clasps as a cache of bows and arrows was quickly passed through the crowd. 

          Tyreantum joined the reception party and stood in the middle of the crowd.  He unrolled his flag and talked to the men with matching red arm bands.  Several men armed with bows and arrows moved away and strategically positioned themselves around Hantuman and Nephi.

          The voyage successfully completed; Hantuman dropped the anchor.  And Tyreantum simultaneously waved his flag!
         
          The daring mutiny turned out to be rather anticlimactic.  Hantuman and Nephi didn’t put up any resistance at all.  They acted as if taken totally by surprise.  If the men from the canoes anticipated a good struggle and fight, they were severely disappointed by how easy it was for them to capture Hantuman and Nephi who didn’t even yell or scream.  On the other hand, the men with red arm bands whooped and hollered as if they had defeated a tremendous army.   

          At some point during all this shouting, Tyreantum barked out an order, “Here, take these strong cords!  Tie them up!  Don’t let them get away!  Take them…”

          Tyreantum never finished his last command.  Moriancom jumped from the mast high overhead and landed squarely on top of Tyreantum.  Tyreantum was knocked over onto his back and lay sprawled out on the deck, arms and legs flailing in the air.  He looked like an overturned turtle that is not able to get back on its feet.

          The men from the canoes were initially surprised to see Tyreantum attacked.  Then they all rushed at Moriancom, hollering and shouting.  Moriancom lay on the deck, temporarily stunned after jumping from such a great height.  Fortunately for him, Tyreantum’s soft body had cushioned the fall.

          Moriancom struggled back to his feet and faced his attackers as they closed in from all directions.  He desperately kicked the first three men away from him before a dozen more closed in.

          The fight was over almost as fast as it began.  Overpowered by several men on all sides, Moriancom was soon subdued and held firmly with his arms twisted behind his back.  He was no longer able to resist.

Tyreantum managed to slowly roll over and pushed himself into a kneeling position.  With one hand, he reached for his feathered head band which had been knocked completely off; with the other, he attempted to comb his thin air back over the top of his head.

With the assistance of a man with a red arm band, Tyreantum regained his feet.

“Well, well, well.  What have we here?”  Tyreantum made a triumphal gesture with his arm and pompously paraded to the front and center of the group of men.  His hair remained out of place.         “Seems like we got some excitement for our prize after all.  Good work, men.  We didn’t want this to happen too easily, did we?  You will all get your rewards!”

          Tyreantum hobbled over to Moriancom who was being restrained by two men who held his arms tightly clamped behind his back.  Tyreantum swore at Moriancom and spat in his face.

“So, it’s you that’s the traitor, eh?  I should have known.  I thought I saw you sneaking around by yourself one night.  I imagine you must think yourself pretty brave standing up and trying to protect your older brothers.  But you’re not!  That was very stupid!  You will be joining them in prison.”   

          Moriancom’s unexpected fight had taken everyone’s attention away from Nephi and Hantuman.  Tyreantum strutted over to Hantuman and Nephi with the intention to mock them next.  Instead, with fear in his voice, he roared back to his men, “You fools!  Get those cords tied now!”

Nephi and Hantuman were never fully bound.  Moriancom’s surprise assault had interrupted the process.  Four men dashed up and finished binding the legs and feet, and the arms and hands of Hantuman and Nephi with strong cords.  After they were tightly bound, Nephi and Hantuman were thrown to the side of the deck where they lay on their backs, side by side.  Everybody stood by and watched while the men did this to Nephi and Hantuman.

Everybody, that is, but Moriancom.  Moriancom recognized a slight opportunity for him.  He decided to chance it.

          Exerting all his strength with a quick move, Moriancom somehow managed to untwist his right arm just enough so that the man holding it lost his grip.  He jerked his right arm free and pivoted swiftly to his left to deliver an uppercut directly to the jaw of the captor holding his left arm.

          The sudden, unexpected blow to the jaw sent his captor reeling backwards, freeing his left arm.  Twisting back to his right, Moriancom swung as hard as he could with his left arm.  His left fist landed squarely in the face of the captor to his right.  He was free again!

          Moriancom raced to the side of the ship.  He grabbed a rope and pulled himself up on a rail.  He looked down to the water below.  Waves churned the water into a white whirlpool and crashed against the rocks along the shore.

          Men from the canoes rushed after Moriancom shouting, “Stop him!  Get him!”

A pursuer mounted the rail right behind Moriancom.  “Oh no you don’t!” the man snarled.  “You’re trapped now!”

          Moriancom paused only briefly.  He jumped for the water and disappeared under the white foam.

Hantuman and Nephi could only watch helplessly as Moriancom fled from their enemies.  They saw Moriancom make his jump, and he was gone.  They listened to the shouts of the men tell a story of deliverance.

“Where is he?  Do you see him?”

“No!  Keep looking.”

“He probably did us a favor by killing himself.  The waves are really crashing against the rocks over there!  We’ll probably find his body washed up on the shore.”

          There was no more shouting among the men for a long time --- only the pounding roar of one wave after another smashing against the rocks.

          “There he is!  Look, over there!  See, he’s right in front of the rocks!”  The men started shouting again.

          “You’re right.  I see him too.  And another big wave is about to hit.”

          “Wow!  That was a big one!”

“Now where is he?  Do you still see him?”

“No.  That must have done it.  He’s been crushed or drowned.”

“Oh yeah!  Look again!  There he is crawling on the beach.”

“I don’t believe it!  That huge wave actually carried him over the rocks and onto the beach!”

“Let’s try our arrows.  They’ll stop him.”

“They all missed!  It’s too far.” 

“Look, there he goes behind those dunes.  He got away.”

Tyreantum was the last person to speak.  “Well, well.  He was lucky this time!  We’ll catch up to him and get him next time, won’t we?” 

Although they were unable to see beyond the deck where they lay bound hand and foot, Nephi and Hantuman had a mental picture of Moriancom’s escape.  Despite their own desperate situation, they were more worried about Moriancom than they were about themselves.  They rolled to their sides to look at each other.  Gratitude that Moriancom was safe, at least temporarily, showed in their faces.


Nephi winked at Hantuman to let him know that he was all right.  Reassured, Hantuman winked back.

Then Nephi declared appreciably, “Well, Amulek, it appears that our Alma is on his way.”

Monday, August 12, 2013

19. Conversion

CHAPTER 19

CONVERSION




          “Ah, young Moriancom.”  Hantuman recognized their visitor.  He had a liking for this handsome young man.  “Welcome.  Come in, although I’m surprised to see you up at this hour.”

          Moriancom was thin, on the tall side for a boy his age and still growing.  He had fair skin and a small amount of acne on his face which was typical of youth his age.  His eyes were clear and dark.  They shone with inner light, curiosity, and intelligence.  

          Hantuman introduced the young man to Nephi.  “This is Moriancom.  He is the young man I told you about who came to me when Tyreantum was …, well shall I say not behaving himself.”

          “My thanks to you, Moriancom.  I’m Nephi.  That was courageous.  I’m grateful for your assistance.”  Nephi extended his hand in greeting.

          Moriancom hurriedly exchanged a hand clasp with Nephi.  He was shy; also nervous.  He glanced behind him to make sure nobody appeared.  It was dark and hard to see.  Moriancom seemed confused and worried about something.  Hantuman invited him into his small compartment and closed the door.  The compartment intended for one person now had three people in it.  They were close.

          “Is there something I can do for you?” asked Hantuman.  Moriancom’s eyes and expression indicated that there was.

          “Well, I’ve been wondering,” began Moriancom hesitantly.  “I’ve been thinking about what you said to Tyreantum.  Something about being smitten down by an avenging angel of God; something like that anyway.”  He stopped as if he didn’t wish to say anything more.

          Hantuman and Nephi wanted to hear more from Moriancom.  They said nothing but nodded encouragement and waited for Moriancom to open up and continue speaking.  Moriancom searched for the right way to explain why he had come.  Slowly, and thoughtfully, he asked, “Well, I don’t really know how to start, so I wonder if you could perhaps answer a question for me?”

          “Of course.  We’ll do our best.”  Hantuman spoke and Nephi nodded in agreement.

          Then without any difficulty in reciting words committed to memory, Moriancom referred to a scripture.  “What do the words mean that were written by the prophet Isaiah, saying: How beautiful upon the mountains are the feet of him that bringeth good tidings, that publisheth peace; that bringeth good tidings of good, that publisheth salvation; that saith unto Zion, Thy God reigneth! Thy watchmen shall lift up the voice; with the voice together shall they sing: for they shall see eye to eye, when the LORD shall bring again Zion.  Break forth into joy, sing together, ye waste places of Jerusalem: for the LORD hath comforted his people, he hath redeemed Jerusalem.  The LORD hath made bare his holy arm in the eyes of all the nations; and all the ends of the earth shall see the salvation of our God?”
         
          Looks of surprise and amazement grew on the faces of both Hantuman and Nephi.

          Hantuman exclaimed, “My, I’m astonished!  Moriancom, are you a priest?  That is not exactly the question I was expecting!”

          “Well, I am a priest,” admitted Moriancom.  “But lately, not a very good one, I’m afraid.  I’m afraid I might be in danger of God’s justice myself.  I’m afraid that sooner or later I’ll be the one to be smitten by God because of my sins.  And I’ve even tried to pray a little after Tyreantum got put in his place.  I, … I felt the power of your words, Hantuman!  You might have only been speaking to Tyreantum, but I knew your words were for me.  I kept some of the writings that I used to read and am secretly studying them again.

“So, …anyway, I once learned that passage from Isaiah because the language is so beautiful, and I remember thinking that it probably had some special meaning for me.  Only Isaiah is really difficult for me to understand because I don’t follow all the symbolism, and … I --- I’m hearing talk that when we get to the land northward, they will slay anyone who believes in these words.”

          Nephi was impressed by the sincerity, the courage, and the faith expressed by the young man who came by night.  He spoke with authority, and said, “Listen to me, Moriancom.  I promise you as a servant of God that He will be your shield and your protection.  I anticipate some very difficult trials ahead for all of us when we arrive in the land northward.  But, if you put your trust in God, I promise you that you will prosper in the land and be the means of bringing salvation to many people.”
         
          “I have faith in you,” said Moriancom, meekly.

          “Don’t put your faith in me,” commanded Nephi.  “Put your faith in Christ!  He is the One who is mighty to save us all.  Now, can I tell you a simple secret about understanding the words of Isaiah?”

          “Please do,” said Moriancom eagerly.

          “Our first father Nephi, the one who came to this land of promise from the land of Jerusalem six hundred years ago, said that a key to understanding the scriptures, especially the words of Isaiah, was to liken them unto us.  The passage that you quoted talks about watchmen, does it not?  So, let’s apply Isaiah’s words to us and this ship.  What is the watchman stationed on the tallest mast of this ship supposed to do?”

          “He is to watch for land.  Among other things.”

          “That’s right,” Nephi continued to teach Moriancom.  “And when the watchman sees the land, what is he supposed to do?  And what is the reaction of others when he does it?”

          “Well, when the watchman sees land, he lifts up his voice and yells down to alert everyone else.  Then everyone rejoices.”

          “Correct, again!”   Nephi had one more question for Moriancom.  “And what are the watchmen in Isaiah looking for?”

          “Oh.  I never thought about it that way before!”  Moriancom’s eyes lit up.  “They are watching for the coming of the Lord, for the establishment of Zion.”

          “Yes!  You understand perfectly, my young friend.  No wonder there is to be rejoicing and singing and good tidings and peace.  Like finding land after being lost at sea, seeing the coming of the Lord means that we are saved.  I am a watchman looking for the coming of the Lord.   And I know that He shall soon be here in the flesh.  My heart will rejoice when I see Him.”

          “As will mine,” added Hantuman.  “Moriancom, you will make a great watchman.  What else can we help you with?”

          “Thanks.  Uhh, nothing else right now I guess.  You’ve helped me tremendously already.  I’d better get going before somebody notices I’m here.”

          “Wait a moment, Moriancom.”  Hantuman opened a box he kept in the corner of his compartment and pulled out a scroll.  “Here, take this.  When you have a chance, this will be something for you to read.  And if you have questions about it, come back any time.”

          “Thanks, I will.”  Moriancom took the scroll and hid it inside his robe.

          Hantuman checked to see if anybody would notice Moriancom leave from his private compartment.  Everything was quiet and peaceful.  All the other passengers had retired for the night.  He signaled that the way was clear, so Moriancom scurried off by himself.

Nephi and Hantuman noted after Moriancom’s first visit that he was the one most frequently stationed at the crow’s nest where the highest beam made a cross with the mast.  They were exceedingly pleased that Moriancom was their watchman.  Only by looking up closely to Moriancom on the cross could they discern that he had a scroll with him.

The watchman’s duty was usually assigned to someone who was young and strong, so Moriancom fit that requirement.  But the watchman’s job was a lonely job, a boring job, a hard job, and somewhat scary because of the height and the difficulty climbing up and down on the ropes and in the wind.  The watchman’s job was a job that most of the passengers tried to avoid.

          Moriancom met with Nephi and Hantuman two more times before the voyage ended.  Both times, like the first, were at night when he thought nobody else would notice.  Each time he came, he asked questions about something he had recently studied.  Nephi and Hantuman answered Moriancom’s questions, frequently referring to other passages in the scroll he was reading. They also gave Moriancom encouragement.  And they bore their testimonies to him.  Before Moriancom left, they made sure that no one noticed him go.

          Moriancom was so often the watchman that it came as no surprise that he was the one to finally yell out, “Land!  Land ahead!  There is land!”