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Welcome to my blog for the exciting novel Nephi’s Way Back!!

"There's something about the story of getting back home which is one of the seven great stories of literature. How to get back home? And that's what this is." (Tom Hanks in bonus materials of the DVD for the movie Apollo 13.) This novel takes stories from the scriptures and is about getting back home. May you like the scriptures as you liken them to a mission of returning home.

Begin reading with chapter 1. You will find the earlier chapters in the archive and the final chapters on this main page.

Why did I write Nephi’s Way Back?

This is a fictional story based on several scriptures from the Book of Mormon and the Bible and also alludes to events in LDS church history. This linking of stories and events from different times and places shows how the scriptures testify of Jesus Christ and His atonement. In the end, He is the only way back.

Why did I write this blog?

My goal is to share this novel with as many people as possible. If you enjoy this book, your friends will too. Please tell others about this book by inviting them to this site: www.writethewayback.blogspot.com.

Success for me will be when somebody I don’t know comments that they’ve begun to find new insights from the scriptures after reading this book. I truly hope that will be you!

Tuesday, September 24, 2013

22. Prison

CHAPTER 22

PRISON




          Nephi was lowered by the rope tied around his ankles.  This time he was dropped into a deep, dark pit through a narrow crack in the rocks so small that his head repeatedly hit the hard sides every few feet.  He lost consciousness after three sharp blows in succession.  His head hit the bottom of the pit first, and the rest of his body fell hard afterward.  He lay crumbled, face down, on the cold, hard stone at the bottom of the pit for a while without moving. 

When he awoke, he had no idea how long he had been in the pit, how deep it was, or what was in it.  He couldn’t see a thing.  No blindfold had been placed over his eyes; no blindfold was needed.  The dungeon was pitch black.  

With a groan of pain, he managed to roll over onto his side.  He slowly pulled his knees up to his stomach and struggled to curl himself into a sitting position.  The cords had been removed from his wrists and ankles so he was able to hold his aching head in his hands.  He felt blood oozing down the side of his face.

Somewhere in the darkness above him, he heard the thumps and crashes echo from the rocks as they lowered Hantuman into the pit.  Hantuman fell beside Nephi where he moaned in agony.  Nephi didn’t have to move to reach over and feel Hantuman’s shoulder and arm.  Only by physical touch and voice, not sight, did he know that Hantuman was at his side.

Nephi helped Hantuman roll over and pulled him up by the shoulders until he was able to sit at his side.  They leaned on each other to rest and they each held their heads and grimaced in pain.  The rock they were on was cold and wet.  The pit stank like a cesspool.

          “Are you going to be all right?” Nephi asked cautiously.  His own head felt like it had been split apart.

          “Yes.  …  No.  …  I don’t know,” answered Hantuman.  “Honestly, I’ve been better.”

          “Me too,” added Nephi.  “This is the vilest prison I’ve ever been in, I think.  And believe me, I know, I’ve been in a few.  I can’t see how badly you’re hurt.  Can you tell me where it hurts the most?”

          “We’ve shared better prisons together in the past, brother.”  Neither Hantuman nor Nephi had spoken!  Somebody else, invisible and unseen, had spoken to them!

          “Who are you!?  Where are you!?”  Nephi and Hantuman questioned in unison.

          “I am …, I’m sorry.  I didn’t want you to suffer this for me.”

“Lehi!!”  Hantuman and Nephi shouted together in joyful recognition.  “You’re alive!!”

“So I am.  Although at times I’ve wondered if it wouldn’t be better if I just passed on.”  Lehi’s voice did sound weak and shaky.  “I’ve prayed to live long enough to see you again.  And now the Lord has blessed me to hear you again, even if I can’t see you as well as I would like.”
         
          Lehi reached out his hand and touched Nephi on the arm.  Nephi felt his brother’s touch and grabbed his hand with his.  They clasped their hands together and then they threw their arms around each other’s shoulders in an affectionate embrace.  Nephi had the impression he was hugging a skeleton.

          Lehi and Hantuman also embraced one another.

          “Let me untie the ropes from around your ankles,” offered Lehi.  He removed the rope tied to Nephi’s ankles and started to do the same for Hantuman.  Their captors merely dropped the ropes after lowering the prisoners into the pit.  Even with the ropes, there was no way to climb back out and escape.  Nephi attempted to stand on his feet in the darkness.

          “But don’t try to stand up.”  Lehi’s advice was too late.

To his dismay, Nephi’s already battered head struck a rock before he was fully upright.  “Ouch, watch it!  There’s not enough room to even stand up down here.”

Their dungeon was no larger than a small closet.  The three prisoners barely had enough room for them to all sit down at the same time without being on top of somebody else.

          Nephi’s eyes adjusted to his new prison enough to barely discern the silhouette of his brother sitting next to him.  He did not like what he thought he saw.  Lehi was thin, very very thin.  He was a skeleton in rags with a long, scraggly beard covering his face.

“Lehi!  You’re nothing but skin and bones!”  Nephi cried in dismay.
“Let us help you.  There must be something we can do.”

Lehi joked unsuccessfully about his starved appearance.  “You know, at first I couldn’t untie the binding cords from my ankles when they dropped me in here.  But after a while, I just slipped my feet out of them.”

“How long have you been in here?”  Hantuman asked.  And probably the unspoken question he had in mind was how could Lehi still be alive after being down in this pit for so long.

“I think it’s been around a month or so,” Lehi answered.  “It’s hard to keep track of time down here.  Days and nights are the same.  Before this, I was in a regular prison for two months.  They discovered that the other prisoners started to believe the things I told them.   I taught them that the Savior could redeem them from their sins.  I testified that I knew the prophecies were true that Christ would come.  I explained how His infinite atonement goes further, deeper, and into the darkest of prisons to pay for the sins of those who repent.  I think that’s why they put me in here by myself after that.”

The joy of finding Lehi alive faded rapidly.  The reunion of brothers was not the happy celebration it should have been.  The reality of their desperate situation brought extreme sorrow instead.

Lehi told his companions about life as a prisoner in this pit.  He had tried to climb out several times without success; the walls were too steep and too high, the pit was too dark, and the rocks were too slippery.  He had scaled his way up a considerable distance three or four times by putting his back against one wall and pushing with his feet on the opposite wall.  But each time he managed to get as high as maybe a third of the way up, his feet had slipped on either wet rock or mud and he came crashing all the way back down to the bottom.  He considered himself lucky that no bones were obviously broken.

Lehi explained that a guard would lower a rope once a day with a pot of questionable contents for food.  Every now and then, the guards threw down some straw that he tried to sleep on.  To remove his waste, he would have to put it in the same pot they lowered with the food.
         
          Lehi’s condition weighed heavily on Nephi’s heart.  “Why do you think, dearest brother, they have kept you alive at all?  If I could have taken your place to keep you from suffering so much, I would have gladly done so.”         

“Oh, Nephi.  I don’t need to remind you what you and I have already gone through together.  Those experiences were for our good.”  Lehi proved his humility.

“Besides, there is only One who can take my place when I am brought to final judgment,” Lehi testified.  “I know in Whom I can trust.  Does not Christ take upon Himself all our sufferings and afflictions?  The Son of Man will descend below all things, and suffer more than this horrible pit, are we greater than He?

          “As He has done before, can He not do again?  And will He not compensate us for every little sacrifice that we may be required to give.  Yea, even if that sacrifice should be the giving of our very lives.

          “Now, I do not know all things.  And I do not know why I am still alive.  But this much I do know.  I know that some think that the time has come and gone for the sign to be given which was spoken by the prophet Samuel five years ago.

“Samuel said that there would be a day, and a night, and another day without darkness.  Those who keep the calendar have counted the number of moons since Samuel prophesied.  They question if the five years have not already passed.

“As a result, a day has been agreed upon.  When that day comes, unless the sign appears, all those who believe in Christ shall be put to death.  This agreement has been made for all the people upon the face of the whole earth; yea, from the west to the east, and for people both in the land north and the land south.

“In this way, they hope to prove beyond a doubt, to the believers and even more to themselves, that they are justified in refusing to believe in the true prophecies given by the holy prophets regarding our Savior and God.”

          Hantuman listened to Lehi’s words and declared what they implied.  “Therefore, they are perhaps willing to keep us alive until that day arrives.  Then they will kill us also, along with our families and friends.”

          “I presume so,” whispered Lehi.

          Nephi asked, “When is this agreed upon day for the martyrdom of the believers?  Do you know how much longer it will be before it comes?”


Tuesday, September 10, 2013

21. Sin


SIN




          Nephi and Hantuman were dragged across the deck and dumped like trash against some storage bins.  Tyreantum assigned two men to guard them.  But with their hands and feet tightly bound with strong cords, there was nothing they could do to free themselves.

Tyreantum tried once again to smooth his flying, ruffled strands of hair under his crooked feathered head band before giving additional orders to the men from the canoes and the other passengers. 

          Another boat had pulled alongside the ship.  It was a sleek vessel, made of fine wood, and richly decorated with the finest of fabrics.  It had oars for a twelve-man crew.  To have such an exquisite possession, the owner had to be a man of wealth and importance.

A ladder was positioned between the new boat and the rail of the ship.  Two men with red arm bands held the ladder in place, while another man reached out to assist someone climbing the ladder.  The man from the boat reached the top of the ladder and was welcomed on board the ship by assistance from several of them.

Nephi watched the arrival of the new man and recognized him right away.  He wore gold sandals and was dressed in a colorful blue robe with a long, golden sash around his waist.  He had a large gem stone pendant on a golden chain around his neck, and he had a golden head band on his head.

It was Alumon!

 The first thing Alumon did was to look over to where Nephi and Hantuman had been dumped.  He saw that they were tied, hand and foot, and completely helpless.  He said nothing, but nodded approvingly at the two guards assigned to watch them.

          Alumon loved that he could now place himself in charge.  He acted as if the ship and its contents were his.  He made sure that everyone else would believe that too.  He was pleased with himself.  He had been successful again when others had failed.  He didn’t care that Nephi and Hantuman could hear everything he said.  He gave orders to his men and commanded them to quickly carry out his demands.     

          “I want the timber unloaded right away.”  Alumon shouted the order to a group of men with red arm bands who were standing around with apparently nothing else to do.

          “I want my money first!”  Tyreantum marched up to Alumon and challenged him face to face.

          “Don’t you worry your little head feathers.  You’ll get your money as always!” snapped Alumon waving his fingers mockingly over Tyreantum’s head band.  “But only after you have delivered Nephi and Hantuman to prison, as previously arranged.  Got it!?  You know I don’t re-negotiate our deals, Tyreantum.  I thought you’d have already learned that fact by now.

          “The timber gets unloaded first.”  Alumon continued instructing the men.  “Get this timber off now.  Then, I want this ship prepared to sail again.”  Alumon’s intolerance for anyone challenging his authority showed.

          “Sail again?” questioned Tyreantum.  “To where?”

          “Back to the land of Zarahemla, you fool.”  Alumon displayed his air of superiority.  He glared at Tyreantum.  “Sometimes I wonder why you and your people don’t get it.  Because that’s where the timber is.  More timber means more money!  More money means more power.  Do I really need to go on?”

          “No, of course not,” replied Tyreantum.  “But without Hantuman to steer the ship, how do you expect to be able to get back?”

          “Idiot!  Don’t you think I can take care of that?” Alumon sneered.  “I know somebody else with quite a bit of sailing experience.  I have a man who works for me.  Sailing a ship is quite simple really.  There’s nothing to it.”

          “I want twice the amount of money you owe me before I agree on a deal for another shipment.”  Tyreantum started to haggle.  “Plus, I want an equitable share of the profits in addition to the fixed daily rate in taxes.”

          “Yeah.  That’s fair.  You owe us too!”  Some men joined Tyreantum and voiced approval for terms of a new deal.  They didn’t care whether it was Alumon or Tyreantum who made the plans as long as they got paid money for what they did.

          Alumon went on giving orders and totally ignored the remarks about more money.

“Here’s what we need to do.  As soon as the timber is unloaded from this shipment, I want supplies and provisions brought aboard for the next trip.  I want enough water and enough food for fifty people for at least a month.  The sooner all the needed provisions get stowed, the sooner you will all be wealthier.  Go to work!

          “Guards!”  Alumon motioned to the men who were guarding Nephi and Hantuman.   “Take these wretched prisoners out of my sight.  Make sure there is no way they could ever escape.  They would claim that a God had freed them.  I’ll have none of that!  How sadly does it appear that their God has abandoned them.  And just when they need Him the most!”

          Hantuman was the first one to be grabbed by the feet and dragged off clumsily to the back of the ship.  Another rope was tied around his ankles.  Two men held the rope while another man pushed him overboard.  Hantuman was lowered head first out of sight.

Tyreantum, upset that Alumon had assumed total leadership, saw that Nephi was temporarily alone, was helpless, and was somebody on whom he could take out his frustration.  He couldn’t resist abusing Nephi one last time.  He went over to Nephi and kicked him in the ribs.  Then he spat in his face.

          “Well, Nephi.  What do you have to say for yourself now, eh?”  Tyreantum didn’t expect an answer.

          “I’ll bet you’re wishing your wife were here to save you again this time like she did the last time, don’t you?  ---  Oh, wait.  That’s right.  --- You don’t really know the whole story yet, do you?

“It doesn’t matter now.  Let me tell you.  It doesn’t make a difference anymore.  Your fate is sealed this time.  You’re as good as dead this time for sure.  This time I’m getting the money I’ve been promised for killing you.

“You think I killed your wife, don’t you?  And, you’re right.  The thing you don’t know --- is that it truly was just an accident after all.  I was actually attempting to kill you!!

“She saved you, Nephi!  She saw the knife right before I was going to stab you!  She instinctively jumped between us to save you.  She started to attack me with her bare hands!  But I defended myself with the knife.  That must have been when little Timothy looked up and saw us together.  I managed to hit her on the back of her head with the butt of the knife.  She started to run.  I ran after her to the edge of the platform where I pushed her from the top and she fell to her death.

“After that, I couldn’t go after you as planned.  The commotion caused by your wife took away my opportunity.

“Was her skull broken by my hitting her on the head, or not until she fell off the pyramid?  Doesn’t matter, does it?  She was dead.  And so will you be before much longer!

          “So long, Nephi.  I won’t be troubled by you again.  I hope you die in pain!”

The guards returned to take Nephi away.  Like Hantuman, he was grabbed by the feet and dragged cruelly to the back of the ship.  They tied another rope to his feet and pushed him over the side, head first.  He was lowered into a canoe. 

Tyreantum watched from the ship until he saw that Nephi was tossed into the bottom of the canoe.  The canoe was paddled to shore by four men wearing the red arm bands.

Satisfied, Tyreantum turned around and watched as men brought up the timber from below.

He would never see Nephi again.